Post by phsycic on Nov 5, 2005 11:33:03 GMT
Anyone who has my msn addy will know that i like creating books, TV shows and movies (None have gone ahed.......much) Well my latest TV show idea has popped into my mind and this is the story for one or two or three episodes.
UNCOMPLETE
Angelic Secrets
Into the Shadow-world
By Tom East
Prologue
It was Friday the 13th and Rose, the eldest sister, had been clearing out the attic when she found a small Box with an inscription on the back. She put it down on the table and continued cleaning. Once Rose had had enough she went to her room to rest. Later that night, Melissa, who is the youngest sister, had thought she had heard noises in the attic so she went and checked. She spotted the Box immediately and went over to it. She had flipped it over and read the inscription out loud:
Three shall be One, and one shall be three,
The Powers we seek shall come to we,
Who seek them out but for no gain,
We shall only ever stop the pain.
In this night of all nights,
The world is in balance and all the frights,
That come from below and devour,
Give us the Power, Give us the Power.
It was then that they received their powers, the power of Premonitions to Rose, the power of Deflection to Katrina, the middle sister, and the power of Invisibility to Melissa.
Later that night they were attacked by somebody who claimed to be the servant of the Dark Lord. With their new-found powers the girls vanquished him and begun their destiny as Witches.
During the year, Rose’s premonitions became longer and more clearer, now including voices and Melissa could turn other people or objects invisible if she touched them.
When they finally came face-to-face with the dark lord, Morgand, the girls had their toughest challenge yet. At the end of the year the girls finally vanquished from a little help from their father who had returned from the dead after a confidence spell Melissa had cast.
A Year later Rose had gained the Power of telepathy, which worked perfectly with her premonitions. Katrina and Melissa were rather jealous but quickly got over it. But Morgand found a way to return and succeeded on ruining the Girl’s lives once more. At the end of the year, Melissa discovered that their father was still alive and in hiding. But where, was unknown. As soon as Morgand was vanquished once more, Melissa shared the news with her sisters. Her sisters where angry at her for keeping the secret and Melissa left town and went to America.
In March of the next year, Katrina and Rose had gone to America to find Melissa. They discovered their sister, battered and Bruised, and with no memory. They brought her home and tried to keep her safe from the demon attacks and get her memory back at the same time. But this was a struggle and for the last time, Morgand was able to squeeze through the ghost roads and into the Girl’s world.
Melissa soon gained back her memory, but in doing so, let free all the demons they had vanquished. The lower level demons where a push-over but a certain enemy seemed as if he could not be defeated. This was Count Vladicaus, King of all vampires. It was he that finally killed Rose, and it was he who took Katrina’s powers. Thus with no sister and hardly any powers, the girls where easily defeated.
In June though a portal was opened from the box in the attic and through came Emily, a mysterious girl from the future and a secret that could turn the sisters world around. She aided the sisters, retrieved Katrina’s powers for her and filled Rose’s place right in.
But now a demon has attacked and is powerful enough to destroy all three girls………………………………………
Chapter 1
Emily walked down the corridor, waiting for Katrina to come out of the bathroom. “Hurry up!” she mumbled through the door. Suddenly the door opened and Katrina walked out looking really grumpy. Emily walked into the bathroom
UNCOMPLETE
Angelic Secrets
Into the Shadow-world
By Tom East
Prologue
It was Friday the 13th and Rose, the eldest sister, had been clearing out the attic when she found a small Box with an inscription on the back. She put it down on the table and continued cleaning. Once Rose had had enough she went to her room to rest. Later that night, Melissa, who is the youngest sister, had thought she had heard noises in the attic so she went and checked. She spotted the Box immediately and went over to it. She had flipped it over and read the inscription out loud:
Three shall be One, and one shall be three,
The Powers we seek shall come to we,
Who seek them out but for no gain,
We shall only ever stop the pain.
In this night of all nights,
The world is in balance and all the frights,
That come from below and devour,
Give us the Power, Give us the Power.
It was then that they received their powers, the power of Premonitions to Rose, the power of Deflection to Katrina, the middle sister, and the power of Invisibility to Melissa.
Later that night they were attacked by somebody who claimed to be the servant of the Dark Lord. With their new-found powers the girls vanquished him and begun their destiny as Witches.
During the year, Rose’s premonitions became longer and more clearer, now including voices and Melissa could turn other people or objects invisible if she touched them.
When they finally came face-to-face with the dark lord, Morgand, the girls had their toughest challenge yet. At the end of the year the girls finally vanquished from a little help from their father who had returned from the dead after a confidence spell Melissa had cast.
A Year later Rose had gained the Power of telepathy, which worked perfectly with her premonitions. Katrina and Melissa were rather jealous but quickly got over it. But Morgand found a way to return and succeeded on ruining the Girl’s lives once more. At the end of the year, Melissa discovered that their father was still alive and in hiding. But where, was unknown. As soon as Morgand was vanquished once more, Melissa shared the news with her sisters. Her sisters where angry at her for keeping the secret and Melissa left town and went to America.
In March of the next year, Katrina and Rose had gone to America to find Melissa. They discovered their sister, battered and Bruised, and with no memory. They brought her home and tried to keep her safe from the demon attacks and get her memory back at the same time. But this was a struggle and for the last time, Morgand was able to squeeze through the ghost roads and into the Girl’s world.
Melissa soon gained back her memory, but in doing so, let free all the demons they had vanquished. The lower level demons where a push-over but a certain enemy seemed as if he could not be defeated. This was Count Vladicaus, King of all vampires. It was he that finally killed Rose, and it was he who took Katrina’s powers. Thus with no sister and hardly any powers, the girls where easily defeated.
In June though a portal was opened from the box in the attic and through came Emily, a mysterious girl from the future and a secret that could turn the sisters world around. She aided the sisters, retrieved Katrina’s powers for her and filled Rose’s place right in.
But now a demon has attacked and is powerful enough to destroy all three girls………………………………………
Chapter 1
Emily walked down the corridor, waiting for Katrina to come out of the bathroom. “Hurry up!” she mumbled through the door. Suddenly the door opened and Katrina walked out looking really grumpy. Emily walked into the bathroom
I wanna read more, I liked the name, it's great and the Prologue sounds intersting.. so i wanna read it as soon as you update it ... 